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The Dusk Child

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2597805/2/The_Dusk_Child

Hey, curious, I know it's not much right now, but what're your thoughts?

Permalink Reply by Jade on November 25, 2008 at 1:21pm: This is very good. I especially like the cosmology.; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Kaiyuga on November 25, 2008 at 1:27pm: Really? I know I've put Joy is My Name on hold due to a plot malfunction :P and thanks, I'm trying to expand on the theology of the race while I'm at it XD

Time for my three questions:

What did you like?
Where were you confused?
Where do you want to hear more?; ▶ Reply to This

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